New Narrative!

 The fog at my place during the winter nights really made me rethink my whole narrative for my opening scene...

On a misty winter night, a boy cycles in the streets as usual , enjoying the cold of the night. He is listening to a podcast about how people are going missing in the darkness of the night, but he didn't really pay a lot of attention. The mist seemed beautiful but little was the boy aware of what was in the mist with him. He reaches home, parks his bicycle and heads to the swings in his backyard for some peace. He experiences a strange presence and feels like he is being watched. He looks around and finds nothing suspicious, but is unaware that he is not alone at all. Suddenly, he reacts to a sudden loud eerie  scream coming from all directions and he shakes in fear, getting of the swing. A disturbingly tall figure in a robe with the bloody skull of a ram (based on BAPHOMET, a being worshipped by Satanists) instead of a head appears in front of him.. He tries outrunning the creature but the entity appears in front of him, and he falls on the ground after bumping into it. The fear in the boy's eyes raises immensely, and the final thing he stares at is the screaming head of the bloody ram, locked in eye contact, and then poof! both the boy and the mysterious phantom disappear in thin air, and the swing is left swinging by itself in the quite of the night.    

I’m gonna work on this story to somehow improve it. Changes can take place on the spot too! Let’s see how it goes :)